Erwins Felicide "I'll be Careful You'll Be Dead"


Erwins Felicide Album Cover

Erwins Felicide Album Cover

Tuesday, 12 October 2010

New Narrative Ending

When getting feedback on our line by line plan of the video, we realised that we had a problem with our narrative's ending.

In our very first draft of the treatment we had the antagonists being defeated by the lead meeting his band mates at the end of narrative. However, as our ideas developed we soon lost the idea of him meeting his band mates due to practical reasons, but we did not reconsider how we would now defeat the antagonists, so they just dropped away for no reason.

After a considerable amount of verbal brainstorming, we came to the conclusion that we would have to have some sort of confrontation.

Our final idea for this is the lead getting trapped in a dead end by the antagonists, but in this, he finally faces up to them and his acknowledging their presence defeats them.

This follows our symbolism of the antagonists as temptations of teenage life, as by standing his ground against their pressure and facing up to them he is defeating them

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