Feedback to pitch (dom and kerry)

-i think she quite the idea generally as there was nothing that was majorly critised
-disliked the idea of the antagonists in HOODIES but instead have masks or face paints to make it more quirky - agreed it needed more development
- also thought the FOLLOWING should be developed to the antagonoist just being around and staring at the snger in order to make it more weird and surreal
-liked the female in the band
-thought alot of effort had gone into the presentation

we will take on board this feedback and try and adapt and improve our idea - but it is encouraging if there were no major flaws identified

i dont think our pitch will need to be majorly changed for tomorrows presentation (good luck claire and wanda)


Social networking ideas good - could set up Facebook, Twitter

Will the crowds be a problem for the narrative? Should probably avoid tourist hotspots, find alternatives not in the centre of London

Seward Studio can't be used over half-term, possibly on Saturday: 8AM to 2PM. Lighting would require somebody else to help out. Could be better to go for other studio but would need to light by ourselves - look up if studios provide lights.

Check previous years' blogs for an idea of studio hire - Voodoo Child / Mel and Tania - studios, in Barnet.

£80 is good for a day but should do test shoots in the Seward. Plan a lot.

Antagonists need work: break down the lyrics and work out where they come in and why they do. Different styling options. Make the concept stronger so we know what they represent.

Develop and come back to.

Work it out, blog and inform BLK.